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Killzoneruby

Ooh, It's absolutely amazing :O

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felixthecat

Thank you, Mena. Gosh, it's been a few years since I wrote that (short) novel. Thanks for reading it. Now that I've read the first two books in Yancey's trilogy...the third and final book comes out in late May...I'm kind of deflated. Little Amelia doesn't go through anything... Show more

Killzoneruby

XD alrighty :3

Lady_L3OP@RD

Yes, I thought of the 5th Wave as well while reading this but only because I just finished the first book. I would highly encourage you to continue this story: don't compare your story to others', imbue it with your personal story-telling. It was a delight:)

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Deleted User

I hope that you update soon this book is really good. :)

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felixthecat

"Closer To Heaven" was the first draft, published for free here.

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okay thanks so much!!

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felixthecat

Thanks Stephen. I'll be updating soon. Trying to complete the rewrite before the ABNA contest opens in a few weeks!

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S.P. Johnson Jr.

I love the voice and the pace is spot on. Nicely done.

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I just finished chapters one, two, and three. Wow! You were right when you said you would a lot more action! The fact that these creatures seem to be following them is terrifying. Throughout this new draft, I am able understand why Amelia is friends with Munster. He helps get and cares for her, despite his crude mannerisms. I can't wait to see what new things you come up with for this story :)

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felixthecat

Chapter Two is up! I'm beginning to study YA a little more closely...hmm. I have a lot to learn:)

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XD

Let the reading... commence!

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I finished the first chapter. Well done! The narration is much clearer, and the story is even more intriguing! Those creatures - whatever they were - sent shivers up my spine as I read. A very good job!

I did notice, on the bottom of page seven, a missing quotation mark. Just a note.

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felixthecat

Thank you for taking the time to read, and especially for giving your feelings about the story (so far) and the characters presented.

I'll go back in and search out that oops. I appreciate your eyes. That's why we're all here:)

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Please let me know when you update!